Microfiction: Men to Monkeys

Story 1 || 6 words: Men who disobeyed turned into monkeys. Story 2 || 2 sentences: God told men to not fish on Sundays. Yet, the men fished, so they were turned into monkeys. Fishermen on a Lake - Courtesy of Phelps Law Office Author's Note: For this set of microfictions, I opted to write my own versions of The Origin of Monkeys. The original story tells of how a man of God came to men and told them not to fish on Sundays, for the fish needed a day to feed. The men obliged and went about home to rest. Then, a woman came and saw the many fish feeding in the water. She came home to the men at once and bid them to go fish, else they be loved no more. So, the men head out to fish again, but God turned them into monkeys for disobeying. For my first microfiction of 6 words, I tried to remain abstract in my word choice. Readers who know the original story will be able to make sense of the few words. Conversely, readers who are unfamiliar with the original story will be able ...